update documentation for power automate - #814
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Ivan, pls review documentation again and update if necessary
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| Contractions | 11 |
| Plurals | 13 |
| Substitutions | 9 |
| AllowsYouTo (rewrite) | 1 |
| DesiredAsAdjective (rewrite) | 1 |
| Dale: passive-voice | 3 |
| Dale: wordiness | 1 |
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| docs/directorymanager/11.1/admincenter/workflow/advancedsettings.md:81 — Dale: passive-voice | 'will be auto deleted' has no clear singular actor in context and the surrounding '30 days old and older' phrasing makes an active rewrite risk altering meaning. |
| docs/directorymanager/11.1/admincenter/workflow/implement.md:114 — Dale: passive-voice | 'The Add Approvers dialog box is displayed' is a conventional UI-result passive with no clear actor; rewriting risks changing meaning. |
| docs/directorymanager/11.1/admincenter/workflow/implement.md:95 — Dale: passive-voice | 'the approver is redirected and auto-authenticated' — conventional automatic-behavior passive; active rewrite is ambiguous and not clearly an improvement. |
| docs/directorymanager/11.1/admincenter/workflow/powerautomate/installproxy.md:135 — Dale: xy-slop | 'contains only the leaf certificate, not the full chain' is a clarifying, meaningful contrast rather than the 'x is not y, x is z' rhetorical pattern. |
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Some guidance may lead customers to open NDM DataService (and so NDM as a whole, because it all runs on the same host and port, except the proxy) to the internet. We don't want that.
Some guidance still references to a proxy zip package, which has been removed. Binaries are shipped within the proxy installer.
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docs/directorymanager/11.1/admincenter/workflow/implement.md
docs/directorymanager/11.1/admincenter/workflow/powerautomate/installproxy.md
docs/directorymanager/11.1/admincenter/workflow/powerautomate/integrate.md
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Code ReviewScope: correctness/build only (config, routing, links, anchors, scripts, workflows). Documentation content and style are handled by a separate workflow. This PR contains no changes to No issues found. Details of what was checked:
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